Evil-Dog's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Dis Man]

Hmmm...bah

First annoying thing, you NEED a preloader...there's no reason to not have a preloader, it's easy to do, NG even gives one for free.
and huuuhh....what'S with the people laughing in the background...it's SO annoying...bob and tom show hmm ?
Can'T say anything about the graphics they were badass...but I suggest you use your talent to make your own cartoon, your own story.

And I suppose the main goal of "Disman" was to be funny. I didn't laugh at all so...it's kinda subjective tho...anyway...didn't realy like it.

Keep it up, make up your own serie.

[Massacre 4]

Not again....

Dude....that is soooooOOOOOOOOOOOOO overdone.
I can't say much, your lack of originality totally kills this movie. I've seen this "room with the stairs and the boxes with guys hanging in there until one come with guns and martial arts to spray blood and bullets everywhere with a slo-mo effect at some point" at least 5 times. And that doesn't include the thousands of other xiao-xiao wannabe that has been published...so except that this particular movie lags when it zooms in/out (which sucks by the way) I don't see anything new here. I can just ask you to THINK and come up with something ORIGINAL next time you want to make a "cool" flash movie. I can see the effort you put in this tho. So keep it up. And remember, originality doesn't hurt.

[NG Time Trial III: SE]

Impressive !

Dude, that was neat !
Very artistic and well done. I liked the story...the line...becoming a sphere...becoming a human...in a weird place...in a quest for paradise huh ? all that with a good respect of the color limitation. Good choice on Dreamscaper's music (my fav audio artist) and thanks for picking one of my pieces I'm honored to contribute to such a good and hard worked creation.
There were nice details like the raising blood level :D The frame-by-frame animations were also awesome...the part where the face in the rock gives our main character a sword throught his mouth...that's the kind of idea that makes me say "wow..." I gotta tell ya, it's impressive man.
Continue this story I wanna see the rest :)

Peace

D responds:

It was my first time actually looking at the audio portal, and I was impressed with the quality of some of the music. The moment I heard both of the songs, I knew I had to use them. So thanks for making it :) I didn't think anyone would catch the raising blood level, and the rock face is my favorite part. Well now I can continue it(with out a deadline) and have even more details! Thanks for the review.

[Anal Bananal Vol. 1]

Why ?

Why do you make bad movies ?
Why do you even take the time to make this ?

Here are some tips that you're gonna ignore
1) Don't make random things, it sucks unless very well done, here it's not the case.
2) Don't use sprites and stupid images from the net to make a movie.
3) Make a story or something
4) Take more time and work harder on what you do

Have fun

VanilllaCokeClock responds:

Thanks for your suggestions.

[Movie of Kung foo Action]

AAArrgghh....

xiao-xiao style movies...SO FUCKING OVERDONE!
it was pretty good, your animations were too amateur tho...but please...for everyoneS' sake, let's move on with original stuff and just drop the damn stick fight movies.

[Old School Anime Tribute]

Holy shit !

So many hours and talent "wasted" into this "empty" creation.
I say "wasted" cause it's not really wasted.
I say "empty" cause it's not that empty, just lacks something actually interesting for me and probably for most people.
Don't get me wrong that was very good.
But it breaks my heart to see so much time put into that when you could have worked on a nice story, the start of a great serie, something interesting you know (no you don't ? that's just me)
Anyway good work, keep it up

[Nikata - Revenge]

Don't give up

Hey there...I'll be brutally honest with you.
This isn't very good.
The drawings were too sketchy, the sounds were a little cheap (typical sounds from flaskkit)
And the voice acting was fake (done by you I guess)
The animations werent bad...not very good either.

Things to keep in mind for your next movies.
1) Clearer voice acting.
2) More animations (moving clouds, moving grass maybe, more fluid sword movements, etc)
3) Better drawings (always like when we see their faces, those were better)
4) more sounds (like when the guy fall down after being cut, there should be some sounds of him falling down)

But dude you're only 13 years old and you do this so Do me a favor and keep doing flash animations and practicing and you'll be damn good in a couple years.

PS : Don't be mean to those who are mean just ignore them, they are idiots so don't be like them.

Peace

wallpaperman responds:

thanks, moving clouds would improve it, yeah I like to work up the idiots :-P I looked for sounds of him falling down for like half an hour, and made some but they were all crap so I didn't bother. my next flash is called "demon slug from hell" if you wanna see it hahaha

[Fantastic Realm Chapter 1]

Oh yeah, that's appreciated.

Awesome guys.

The graphics were very nice althought the animations were a little jerky some times.
So basicly what I wanna say is that the drawings are amazing but work more to get more fluid animations. (try working in 24fps instead of 12)

The sounds were not always appropriate, like we don't hear the footsteps when we're near and then we see them on the bridge very far and we hear the footsteps...kinda weird. The music was VERY nice tho :D The voice acting could also be louder and equalized cause sometimes it's lost in the ambient sounds and hard to understand. So for the audio in the next one : More sounds, appropriate volumes and places and a clearer voice acting :)

You got a nice/professional style so I really hope you keep working on this serie and get to perfect your style and art (more tweens :P).
I really appreciate people who put lots of effort into what they make and here it's obvious, congrats guys, that was great and genuine !

Peace

Evil-Dog