Evil-Dog's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Wonderland 3D RPG (fixed)]

Your other Wonderland games were better

Alright dude, it's not quite good here
first the graphics are pretty bad, ugly swish graphics, why didn'T you draw the character instead of doing them with 3D ? it would look much better !!
The game play and the layout of your game is quite amateur too, the colors and the text fonts and size are really weird and cheap...use a better color scheme and smaller fonts it will look way more professional.
then there's the gameplay problems...you can't go back from the abandonned building ? there's no real RPG elements...no stats...no character building...no choices...nothing about a RPG...a game with some quests isn't a RPG you know.
You can't go out of the quest building...
then you have like 0.00001 second to kill a zombie with 1 hit ??? there's something wrong man...then the game ends, you ask us to vote 5 and say everything is done by you and don't mention my music which isn't done by you hehe
anyway, you see there's a lot of weak points in your game, I see you're pretty young too and it's quite good for your age, 13 or so....so keep it up

omega3D responds:

!!! Sorry! I forgot to add you in the credits, huh? Crap!!! I really didn't mean to. Sorry. Anyway, I completely agree with everything you said. I take your advice more than anyone elses. You know that, right? Well, anyway, I am working on a game (.html and .js, so I won't be able to put it on newrounds) that is a REAL rpg, with stats, character upgrades, items, skills, choices, etc... so e-mail me if you get the chance, please. I really need to speak to you in person about... stuff...
Anyhow, my new e-mail is [e-mail]
thats mega, zero, m, three, g, a. That's the correct spelling.

[(old)Dance-O-Matic V1.0]

Hehehe

Nice try there.

TheComet responds:

Thx.
I'm working on this still. I was actually intending this to be a BETA but for some reason I called it V1.0...
Bttw, how'd you make a long bar for the tracks? For V2, all I'm really going to end up doing is resizing the boxes to half their size or something to make more fit...O.o

[Rekindled 0.3]

Blah.

Unfinished game, no sounds, stolen concept
Come on be original and finish your stuff before putting it here.

mooseproduce responds:

Well, it's a sequel with permission from the original. Sorry about the unfinishedness, but I'm using Newgrounds as a temporary host for it... :P Hopefully I can get a real host going soon.

[Tip-A-Cow]

haaa....originality :D

Congrats man, this is great.
but I hate you for making me press my buttons so intensivly...it's painful everytime haha
The graphics were awesome, simple and efficient.
(the different levels were extremely well styled.)
The sounds were adequate and good choice on the musics.
The whole concept is very original and that's why I liked it, there isn't much replay value tho, that's probably the biggest down of your game.

Keep it up man. Great effort and great result.

AngryAxel responds:

Wow, Evil-Dog, king of the Audio Portal... Im honored ^_^

Yes, I did have plans on adding a score system, so that players could compete or something, but it never got through... Well, thanx for the review!

[Wonderland 3D World 2]

Worse than the first one

Hi again
I was dissapointed cause you didn't take enough time to polish your game, test it and all...there are several bugs, like when you're in front of the portal you can't go back the bottom button does the same thing as the teleporter button, so it's kinda anoying and you lost some point on the interactivity,

anoter place there's no place to click, you have to guess and there's no clue so it's a little weird...

personnaly, I liked the riddle...but you'll see that NG people are lazy.

keep it up (Spend more time to enhance the game experience next time, with longer puzzles, bigger world, sounds, etc)

Peace
Evil-Dog

potbellybob responds:

Well, this was actually the first game initially, but I had to cut the first game in half because it was like 4.959 mgs. Be a good dog. I'm going to make a better game than this one, and the first one. So keep your eyes out for my new games. (also look on geocities/flashgamearchive/index.html for the rest of my games.) Evil-Dog, please understand. You are my hero, and I want to use only your music for my games. Maybe not the same loops on all of them, so please make some more of that music.

[Wonderland 3D]

Nice work man !

I'm glad you liked and used my music, it's the first good submission that use my music and you made a good choice, it fits very well :)

It took me a little while to figure out what the number-pad does :) I was like "how the hell am I suppose to know what the correct code is..." then I went back...woah...I'm in a different place...I finally finish the game
It's kinda like myst ! nice work

Constructive comment : Add sounds for the actions, like a sound for the lever or when you click the button and go to another place, and sounds for some of the places, like an outside-mood ssounds you know. and a little more animation with the 3D would be nice too, like moving clouds or something like that.

keep it up
the 3D was cool

Evil-Dog

potbellybob responds:

The Evil-Dog himself! I can't believe I actually met him! I would like to talk to you sometime -- my e-mail is [e-mail] and yes, I have YIM. The idea for the game DID come from Myst, by the way, and I'm glad yet another person noticed. Thanx for the review!

[Ask Wade]

Good work man !

It's an original Idea
and when you think about real questions it gets very funny !
The text-to-speech voices sounds good too
and there are a lot of different answers so it's cool

Keep it up

Evil-Dog

halycon responds:

Yeah, I wanted to have it not much larger then 1mb, so I couldn't add anymore voices, otherwise I would put like 200 predictions in there, but I don't think anyone has that much time to listen to all of them. Thanks for reviewing

[Rammer -fighting (full)]

That's not really a game...

Hi there !
Great effort
but here are my advice :
1) Don't use directly the on(key ...) action, use some variable so you won't have Rammer masturbating when you hold the keys. Use boolean variables for your keys like true or false and test those variable to do the correct action.
2) At least let the user move the character and do some proximity test to see if the other is in the weapon range when the user try a weapon.

Good work anyway and keep it up !
Peace

Evil-Dog

Rammer responds:

well if i was great with action script id jump onto it but...i only know the basic stuff...i really dont care if ppl make him masturbate...only perverts would like that

[Support Our Troops!]

yeah

hey man why did you do something like that.
can't you live in peace with those who surround you ?
You support your troop by bitching other peaceful country ?
I'm a canadian and you don't even know me
Probably you know about 2 canadians if it's not less
so what are you talking about ?
Canadians suck ? where did you get that from ?
The US is working for "world peace" (*cough* oil *cough*) ?
Then maybe you should start by getting your superiority problem out of your head and start working on peace...

Creamyteam responds:

listen. i am superior to you. the reason being is that i AM american. if you knew anything you would know that this war isnt about oil. iraq only supplies 10% EXACTLY, of americas oil intake annually. ever hear of a country called venezuela. of course u havent cuz u probably live in an igloo with polar bears while your wiping out species like the beaver. maybe you should watch the news, become an american citizen and get your shit straight. until then keep eating your pea soup and playing your hockey or do whatever the hell else you retards like and mind your own fucking business. im american i'll say what i want.