Score: 9

"hahaha man that was nice."

submission: Phones - Episode 1

date: December 14, 2003

I really liked the flow of this movie.
I'm honored you used my music, and you used it damn well. We could feel he had a chaotic, stressing break time haha
I really laughed so thanks

Keep up the good work !
For a second movie this rocks man.

Peace :)

Score: 1

"Touching"

submission: crow clock episode 2

date: December 11, 2003

Interesting...
Clocks vote 10
Other people vote between 0 and 2
that's weird isn'T it.

You clocks should encourage good movies not bad movies.

And you GameCubeClock you may have chin's permission but your movie is still a bad movie, so pointless.
I mean...is this suppose to be funny (cause a parody is suppose to be funny) ? entertaining ? or is it just some insider crap between clocks ?
Anyway, keep working with flash you'l get better maybe, try to come up with your own ideas instead.

Peace

Score: 4

"Hmmm.....no"

submission: Short Show: Port-o-potty

date: December 11, 2003

Many submissions like this ?
I implore you to reconsider (Kung pow haha)

I don't think people enjoy 15 seconds short movies. I dont. And what was the point ? Some guy come and push that...toilet...over ?

Nah...work longer on things that are actually funny, that make sense and that last at least 1 minute instead.

Score: 9

"Well done"

submission: Poninjas Episode Four

date: December 11, 2003

I love your episodes man, so simple yet so effectivly entertaining. Congratulation :)

Here's my review...

Graphics : simple and pretty. For your next episode I suggest you put more shading to your characters as well as shadows (it will look so much cool :D simple shadows would do it)
Sparks when the metal weapons collide would also be nice. Ever thought about adding motion-blur ? blurred trails you know...during the slo-mo or during the speedy fights that would be up to you, would be a good eye-candy.
One last thing, you know that black blast area after the ninja gets electrocuted ? it should be two-toned, the part on the floor should be a little darker to actually make you feel that the blast is on the wall and the floor (Simple lighting realism). That's the kind of detail that gives a movie the right touch.

Sound : Awesome, fitting music and cool fighting sounds...not much to say here to make it better :)
oh yeah, the heartbeat sound during the slo-mo is hardly audible...

Interactivity : Nice modified NG preloader... longer episode could require something better with scene selection and all.

Style : A success, like the madness serie you know, simple characters, great action good job on that :) Longer episodes would definitly be a cool improvement, more complex fights and more complex levels too (with stairs, holes, etc)

Violence : Not much but I like your non-bloody style of it. I'm getting tired of the accumulation of blood in every action movies.

Humor : Not really funny, but really entertaining.

That's about it man.
I rarely review movies so intensivly, but I think you deserve such a detailed review. I hope my comment and suggestion will help.

Peace

Score: 0

"No..."

submission: Dead Parents

date: December 10, 2003

No I don'T want to see someone masturbate his friend in front of his dead parent.

Have a better idea next time.

Score: 5

"The 1st episode showed potential"

submission: TYRAN ep 3

date: December 10, 2003

but it seems that each episode gets cheaper.
Due to lack of effort and polishement.
Spend more time on each episode, make better (smoother) animations, take more time to draw the stuff...to unfold your plot in a better way...actually try to get better, not get worse...
There's no need to rush the episodes you know...we can wait for a good product. But a bunch of quickly made episodes isn't what people wants.

The score is dropping with each episode, this should be a sign.

You have a good concept so don't give up, but spend more time and effort on each episode.

Peace

Score: 4

"Again..."

submission: Jonny6 ep.1(trailer)

date: December 8, 2003

And yet another trailer of an episode of a serie that will never exists.

Good concept
But next time just do an episode.
People don't wanna see trailers in here.
Trailers are for 1 hours and a half movies, not for some 5 minutes flash movies.

Keep it up the idea is good.

Score: 10

"I can relate to this"

submission: The First Thing

date: December 2, 2003

Hey man great stuff !

I wasn't too sure at first, the animation was a bit choppy...like when he walk to the table...but you put the whole thing together so well that it makes you forget about its flaws.

The song was really approriate and the theme is something you can relate to.
I loved the style of it, what the guy thinks....where he goes...the flashback he has.
How the text was written...overall I really liked it.

it's a shame, people (on newgrounds) generally don't appreciate this kind of simplicity in a movie...cause it's not really the type of movies they wanna watch...not enough violence...*sigh*
But absolutly don't change your style man :)

On the constructive side : work harder on the body animations (cause you already got the nice graphics)

Peace
keep em coming

Evil-Dog

Score: 10

"Impressive"

submission: Perfect Kirby 3.3

date: November 28, 2003

Hi there !
I gotta say your animating skills are incredible!
it's not frame by frame but you master the tweening technique with all those changing camera angle and different movement. That was really cool to watch

I have a couple of comment tho.
You should have spent more time on the blood instead of big, tweened, red patch :)
The voice acting was sometime unclear so I couldn't understand everything.
The humor is not my type or humor tho but that's not a critic, it's just my taste, so don't change anything of your style :)

Awesome job
but hey 7mb ? isn't the newgrounds filesize limit 5mb ? :)

Peace

Evil-Dog

Score: 8

"Nice short man !"

submission: ed the blade

date: November 24, 2003

That was sweet !
Thanks for using my music I'm honored :)
I really like the graphic style of this piece, it's original, well drawn and well put together !
the sound were good too

The only bad point is, like other people mentionned, the file size, you used the whole Rage song for the replay section, you should have made a loop of a part of the song or reduce the quality of the song...but I personnaly don't really care about file size. hehe

Keep up the good work

Evil-Dog